Hi, Mayleen!

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] Give one advantage and one disadvantage of having a car. Answer in 2-3 sentences. ^-^) A car is certainly a useful tool. The best thing about having a car is that you can easily and comfortably go where you want to go. The disadvantages are also that people become lazy, pollute the environment, and cost a lot of maintenance money.

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Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for this composition. I have read it well.

You did a good job in pointing out the advantage and disadvantage of having a car.

We can discuss this in class if you want to.^^

_T. Mayleen :)

A car is certainly a useful tool.
>>> Correct!

The best thing about having a car is that you can easily and comfortably go where you want to go.
>>> Correct!

>>> OR: The best thing about having a car is that you can conveniently go to wherever you want to go.

The disadvantages are also that people become lazy, pollute the environment, and cost a lot of maintenance money.

>>> The disadvantages are people become lazy, smoke coming from cars pollute the environment, and they cost a lot for maintenance.

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