Hi, Melissa.

Dear [Name], It was nice to see you, and I hope to keep this class with you. Yesterday, I received the class book "Communicating in Business English", I looked over it. It composed 6 chapters and 11 parts each. Hence, I curious what your plan with this text book. For example, it will be progressed 1 part each day. Also, I will have this class without textbook at our class time. I mean I always answer your phone outside of my office, so I can't bring the textbook with me, even though I review it before the class. In addition, I will try to write a few sentences everyday, so I want you to correct all of them include these sentences that I'm writing now. Then, see you soon Melissa. Sincerely yours, [이름].

Hello  [이름]^^

It sure is nice meeting you too!! I do hope to keep the class with for a long time. Regarding our class most probobly we can finish half a page a day with our 10 minute class, since we also need to give more examples and correct your sentences, anyways let's  try to squeeze as much as we can in our class time.

XoXo,

T.Melissa

Here are my corrections for you:

Dear [Name],
>>Correct
It was nice to see you, and I hope to keep this class with you.

>>It was nice meeting  you, I hope to have keep/have this class with you for a long time.

Yesterday, I received the class book "Communicating in Business English",

>>Yesterday, I received our book “Communicating in Business English”.

I looked over it. It composed 6 chapters and 11 parts each. Hence,

>>I went over it and found out that it has 6 chapters with 11 parts for each.

I curious what your plan with this text book.

>>I am curious what plan do you have with regards to our study material,

For example, it will be progressed 1 part each day.
>>for example how far can we proceed in a day?
Also, I will have this class without textbook at our class time.

>>This is because sometimes I may be having class with you without my book.

I mean I always answer your phone outside of my office,

>>It’s because I always receive your call when I am not at my office.

so I can't bring the textbook with me,

>>So  I can’t have my textbook with me all the time.

even though I review it before the class.

>>I assure you that even if it’s the case, I will review before our class.
In addition, I will try to write a few sentences everyday,

>>In addition, I will try to write few sentences everyday.

so I want you to correct all of them include these sentences that I'm writing now.
>>I want you to please correct all my sentences icluding this letter I wrote you.
Then, see you soon Melissa.
>>See you soon Melissa.
Sincerely yours,

>>Correct
[이름].

>>[이름]