Hi! michelle
학생이 쓴 원문
Finaly...! I can write here.
As you know,I was pretty hardly scik nowdays.
But, today I almost get over! My fever is almos down.
swelling neck is almost down too! I can talk! I can eat foods!
I'm so happy and thanks for my healthy.
every people dose, I know thanks for healthy when I lose my healthy.
And Thank you too. thank you Michelle to worry about me.
After now, you don't do that! because I almost got over !!
See you latter~
HOMEWORK:
Example: I play tennis. (on Mondays)
Answer: I play tennis on Mondays.
1) Our friends must write a test. (also)
Our frieds must write a test also speaking teas too.
2) I was only joking.
3) Did you enjoy the flight both ????
4) Mary dones't have like this hardly watches TV ever.
5) He drives his car carefully.
6) The children play football in the garden.
7) We went to the cinema yesterday.
8) John almost fell off the bike.
9) Her boyfriend probably will buy her some flowers.
10) My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Thank you for writing a composition. Please see some of the corrections I made.
-Teacher Michelle
Finaly...! I can write here.
>>Finally, I can write here.As you know,I was pretty hardly scik nowdays.
>>As you know, I was very sick these days.But, today I almost get over! My fever is almos down.
>>But today, I\'m recovering. My temperature rate is getting lower.swelling neck is almost down too! I can talk! I can eat foods!
>>My swelling neck is feeling better too. I can talk and eat too.I\'m so happy and thanks for my healthy.
>>I\'m so happy and thankful because I\'m healthy.every people dose, I know thanks for healthy when I lose my healthy.
>>I thank all those people who were worried when I got sick.And Thank you too. thank you Michelle to worry about me.
>>And thank you too Michelle for worrying about me.After now, you don\'t do that! because I almost got over !!
>>When I recover, you\'ll not do that anymore.See you latter~
>>See you later!
HOMEWORK:Example: I play tennis. (on Mondays)Answer: I play tennis on Mondays.1) Our friends must write a test. (also)Our frieds must write a test also speaking teas too.
>>Our friends must also write a test. 2) I was only joking.
>>Correct!3) Did you enjoy the flight both ????
>>Did you both enjoy the flight?4) Mary dones\'t have like this hardly watches TV ever.
>>Mary doesn\'t like watching TV.5) He drives his car carefully.
>>Correct!6) The children play football in the garden.
>>Correct!7) We went to the cinema yesterday.
>>Correct!8) John almost fell off the bike.
>>Correct!
9) Her boyfriend probably will buy her some flowers.
>>Correct!10) My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon.
>>Correct!
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