Hi michelle~

2012-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK 1.orator : I think that orator need confidence for oneself. 2.ostentatious : I hate ostentatious peoepl. 3.parched : Korean used parched pollpck to made cook. 4.prefidious : My coworker is prefidious guy. ( I know that you know him. Because I told you about him frequently. kikiki XP ) 5.pragmatic : I usually seriously consider about this is pragmtic thing or not. pragmtic is important item. Hi Michelle.! I had a test about driving ability and My result is SUCCESS ! So I can get chance to have a final test! I really expect to can drive car in real road!! hihihi see you tomorrow~

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I am glad to see that you were able to make your homework. But anyway, I want to congratulate you for doing a great job in your driving test and I am sure you will pass the final test. I hope and pray that you will drive safely . Always take care of yourself, okay? -Teacher Michelle- Here are some corrections for you:I think that orator need confidence for oneself. >>I think that orator needs some confidence for himself/herself.I hate ostentatious peoepl. >> I hate ostentatious people.Korean used parched pollpck to made cook. >> Korean people parched in cooking.My coworker is prefidious guy. >> My co-worker is a perfidious guy.I know that you know him. >>correct Because I told you about him frequently.kikiki XP ) >> Because, I am telling you stories about him frequently.I usually seriously consider about this is pragmtic thing or not. pragmtic is important item. >>I usually consider this as a pragmatic thing. I had a test about driving ability and My result is SUCCESS ! >>I had a test about my driving ability and the result was successful!So I can get chance to have a final test! >>So now, I can get the chance to take the final test.I really expect to can drive car in real road!! >>I am really expecting that I can drive a car in the real road!! >>I am really expecting to drive a car in the real road.hihihi see you tomorrow~ >> I will see you tomorrow...

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