Hi Michelle!
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you to praise me. ^__^
I will keep try to have a good speaking skill.
Anyway. Today I didn't go buffet.
Because my friend canceled owr meeting. reason is she can't make a time because she has 2 meeting. one is me the other is other.
problem is other meeting is not accpet to make time to meet me.
andthan she o.r.d.e.r me"let we meet tomorrow." not ask.
So I told her "I have few schedule that day. sorry I can't"
but, she said " No. Just Out when I call you. So you must out tomorrow." WOW... what Make she like this..
before the vacation she doesn't do like this.
(yeah. she is rude person. but not enough rudeness like now)
1.provocative:doing rudeness person make provocative me
2.prudent:I want be prudent.
3.querulous:I don't like querulouse child
4.rancorous:I guess,Most middle east people racorous Amarican.
Like Korean has rancorous to Japaness.
5.reclusive :speaking softly about hikicomori, it kind of rancorous
things.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am happy to know that you are really practicing English to have a good speaking skill. Don\'t you worry all these things will be possible with constant practice, okay?
-Teacher Michelle-
Here are some corrections for you:
Thank you to praise me. ^__^
>>Thank you for praising me. I will keep try to have a good speaking skill.
>>I will try to keep a good speaking skill.Anyway. Today I didn\'t go buffet.
>>Anyway, I didn\'t go to the buffet today.Because my friend canceled owr meeting.
>>Because my friend cancelled our meeting.
reason is she can\'t make a time because she has 2 meeting.
>>The reason was she can\'t make a time because she has 2 meetings.
one is me the other is other.
>>The one meeting is with me and the other is with another person.problem is other meeting is not accpet to make time to meet me.
>>The problem is the other person did not agree to my friend to make time to meet me.andthan she o.r.d.e.r me\"let we meet tomorrow.\" not ask.
>>And then she ordered me that we will meet tomorrow without asking me.So I told her \"I have few schedule that day. sorry I can\'t\"
>>Correctbut, she said \" No.
>>Correct
Just Out when I call you.
>> We will go out when I call you.
So you must out tomorrow.
>>So you must go out with me tomorrow.
\" WOW... what Make she like this..
>>\" WOW! What made her like this..before the vacation she doesn\'t do like this.
>>Correct(yeah. she is rude person. but not enough rudeness like now)
>>Yeah! She is a rude person but too much rudeness now.1.provocative:doing rudeness person make provocative me
>>I am a provocative person when someone do rudeness to me.2.prudent:I want be prudent.
>>I want to be a prudent person.3.querulous:I don\'t like querulouse child
>>I don\'t like a querulous child.4.rancorous:I guess,Most middle east people racorous Amarican.
>>I guess, most middle east people are rancorous American.Like Korean has rancorous to Japaness.
>>Like Koreans, they are rancorous to Japanese people.5.reclusive :speaking softly about hikicomori, it kind of rancorous things.
>>Talking about \"hikikomori\" person, is a kind of reclusive phenomenon.
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