HI, Michelle

2012-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Hi, Michelle. It's a deep night. My two babies are s[이름]ping now. Now is the greatest time of the day for me. So although I'm tired, I can't fall as[이름]p. During my babies are s[이름]ping, I can surf the internet, study English, read some books and listen to music. Tonight seems very short. Oh my goodness~ I can hear the sound that my babies are tossing and turning. . I have to go into the room. I'm always appreciate you for understanding my situations. A word that you talk to me become a big help to me. Then good night~ See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Amy.I really appreciate your effort and thinking about me while you can not fall as[이름]p. ^_^.I understand your situation becuase I am also a mother. Nothing to worry about me. I just hope that you will always be in good health because I noticed that you had been having a hard time lately. Cheer up, Amy! Everything will be alright soon.Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:Hi, Michelle. >>CorrectIt\'s a deep night. >>CorrectMy two babies are s[이름]ping now. >>CorrectNow is the greatest time of the day for me. >>CorrectSo although I\'m tired, I can\'t fall as[이름]p.>>Correct During my babies are s[이름]ping, I can surf the internet, study English, read some books and listen to music. >>While my babies are s[이름]ping, I can surf the internet, study English, read some books and listen to music.Tonight seems very short. >>CorrectOh my goodness~ >>CorrectI can hear the sound that my babies are tossing and turning. . >>CorrectI have to go into the room.>>Correct I\'m always appreciate you for understanding my situations.>>I always appreciate you for understanding my situations.A word that you talk to me become a big help to me. >>The word that you talk to me became a big help. Then good night~ >>CorrectSee you later.>>Correct

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