Hi~michelle^^

2011-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi~ last class is very exiciting. I'm very happy, because I'm getting better every time. It's thanks to you^^ -In weekend, I mostly go to the downtown and meet my friends, or watching movies. -Usally, I arrive at home six p.m., one hour ago we have class. -I'm ready to descibe the picture. -The elephant do the very aggresive action. -If there is the person inside this car, this situation is very dangerous.

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Hello Ms.[이름], Thank you for having classes with you. You are doing great as time passes by.Keep up the good job! Please takecare always and stay safe! T.Michelle   Hi~ last class is very exiciting.>>Hi! Our last class was very exciting.I'm very happy, because I'm getting better every time.>> I'm very happy because I'm getting better every time.It's thanks to you^^ >>correct >>OR Thanks to you.-In weekend, I mostly go to the downtown and meet my friends, or watching movies. >>Every weekend, I usually go to the downtown and meet my friends to watch movies.-Usally, I arrive at home six p.m., one hour ago we have class.>>I usually arrive home at 6pm, 1hour before our class starts.-I'm ready to descibe the picture.>>correct-The elephant do the very aggresive action.>>The elephant did a very aggressive action.-If there is the person inside this car, this situation is very dangerous.   >> If there is a person inside this car, this situation is very dangerous.   

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