Hi~michelle^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ last class is very exiciting.
I'm very happy, because I'm getting better every time.
It's thanks to you^^
-In weekend, I mostly go to the downtown and meet my friends, or
watching movies.
-Usally, I arrive at home six p.m., one hour ago we have class.
-I'm ready to descibe the picture.
-The elephant do the very aggresive action.
-If there is the person inside this car, this situation is very
dangerous.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms.[이름],
Thank you for having classes with you. You are doing great as time passes by.Keep up the good job! Please takecare always and stay safe!
T.Michelle
Hi~ last class is very exiciting.>>Hi! Our last class was very exciting.I'm very happy, because I'm getting better every time.>> I'm very happy because I'm getting better every time.It's thanks to you^^ >>correct
>>OR Thanks to you.-In weekend, I mostly go to the downtown and meet my friends, or watching movies. >>Every weekend, I usually go to the downtown and meet my friends to watch movies.-Usally, I arrive at home six p.m., one hour ago we have class.>>I usually arrive home at 6pm, 1hour before our class starts.-I'm ready to descibe the picture.>>correct-The elephant do the very aggresive action.>>The elephant did a very aggressive action.-If there is the person inside this car, this situation is very dangerous. >> If there is a person inside this car, this situation is very dangerous.
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