Hi Monica
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Monica
I'd like to paraphrase the first sentence to make it similar to the sencond and the third one
Please check if they are correct
Original sentence;
People can also visit a blood donation center to take part in donating blood
People can also visit a blood donation center and take part in donating blood
People can also visit a blood donation center,taking part in donating blood
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Can I convey the same meaning by switching an adverb.'by' to 'with'
The valuable skills and knowledge for their future can only be acquired by having good and reliable teachers
The valuable skills and knowledge for their future can only be acquired with having good and reliable teachers
Thank a lot for your correction^^
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Hello [이름]!!
Happy Tuesday! I'm so glad about your attitude towards learning. All your sentences are correct. Keep the faith. You're doing an amazing job!
Monica
Hello Monica
>>>correctI'd like to paraphrase the first sentence to make it similar to the second and the third one
>>>correctPlease check if they are correct>>>correctOriginal sentence; People can also visit a blood donation center to take part in donating blood>>>correct or ( to be able to take part in donating blood)People can also visit a blood donation center and take part in donating blood>>>correctPeople can also visit a blood donation center,taking part in donating blood>>>correct
(all three sentences mean the same thing)---------------------------------------------Can I convey the same meaning by switching an adverb.'by' to 'with' >>>correctThe valuable skills and knowledge for their future can only be acquired by having good and reliable teachers>>>>correctThe valuable skills and knowledge for their future can only be acquired with having good and reliable teachers
>>>correctThank a lot for your correction^^
>>>correct
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