Hi Monica
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Happy Wednesday,Monica^^
The more I study English, the more difficult it seems to be.
Please, check the follwing sentnece if it is correct.
In addition,are transition words,'in fact' and 'to be specific,' used appropriately?
The suggetion of the reading that self checkout machine offers customers informative information is also denied by the spaker. In fact, the specaker argues that self checkout machine does not alwyas provide coustomers with useful information. To be specific, the avertisement shown on monitors at stores could over stimulate unwise people to buy unnecessary products
Thanks a lot for your great help
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Hello [이름]!
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Yes, "In fact and to be specific were used correctly in your sentences.
Just be patient. Take care always and don't forget to relax and enjoy. Have FUN!
Monica
Happy Wednesday,Monica^^
>>>correctThe more I study English, the more difficult it seems to be.>>>correctPlease, check the follwing sentnece if it is correct.
>>>>Please check the following sentences if they are correct.In addition,are transition words,'in fact' and 'to be specific,' used appropriately? >>>correctThe suggetion of the reading that self checkout machine offers customers informative information is also denied by the spaker.
>>>The suggestion of the reading that self checkout machine offers customers informative information was also denied by the spaker.
In fact, the speaker argues that self checkout machine does not always provide coustomers with useful information.
>>>correct
To be specific, the advertisement shown on monitors at stores could over stimulate unwise people to buy unnecessary products>>>correctThanks a lot for your great help
>>>correct
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