Hi Monica
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Tudesday, Monica
It's quite chilly here, geting colder and colder, so I have brought a jacket with me
I think I have to take more care of myself not to cathch a cold and hoep you keep in good, healthy condition as well^^
-------------------
Does the first phrase,'with that being said' can be rewrited into the second one,'However, that was being said.'?
I also want a girl who comes from a caring family.
With that being said, I can overlook minor flaws.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Happy Tuesday as well! It's nice to hear that the weather in Korea is getting better already since I've been hearing a lot of complaints about the weather from my students haha! That's right, you should take care of your health not only for yourself but also for the people who love you. Thanks for the concern. I appreciate it! I sure am in good health as well.
They can be rewrited but they will have different meanings already. You can use "with that being said " for positive sentence and "however" for negative one.
Monica
Happy Tudesday, Monica
>>>correct
>>>Happy Tuesday Monica, (>>better)It's quite chilly here, geting colder and colder, so I have brought a jacket with me
>>>correctI think I have to take more care of myself not to catch a cold and hoep you keep in good, healthy condition as well^^
>>>>I think I have to take more care of myself not to catch colds(this noun is always with s, if you say cold it won't mean the same thing) and hope that you are also in good health.-------------------Does the first phrase,'with that being said' can be rewrited into the second one,'However, that was being said.'?>>>correctI also want a girl who comes from a caring family.
>>>correct but it's better to use like than want in this sentence.With that being said, I can overlook minor flaws.
>>>correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.