Hi Monica
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Wednesday Monica.
How are you?
I hope you are having a great conversation with your students
Please check the follwing senteces if there are correct
First of all, during childhood people learn basic skills, such as how to read and how to speak, which are important basic skills to obtain new knowledge.
If a person do not have a reading skill, it is possible for him to fall behind in such a rapidly changing, competitive world.
To illustrate, one of my cousin had no chance to attend schools during childhood because he could not afford to do that.
Whenever I visit him, he always tells me to study hard when you are still young. He have had a great success now, but he is so busy running his own business that there is no time for learning
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I'm doing great, thank you! I hope that you have a wonderful Wednesday as well. I'm looking forward to our next discussion so see you tomorrow! Have a good night ahead!
Monica
Happy Wednesday Monica.
>>>correctHow are you?
>>>correctI hope you are having a great conversation with your students.
>>>correctPlease check the follwing senteces if there are correct.>>>Please check the following sentences if they are correct.First of all, during childhood people learn basic skills, such as how to read and how to speak, which are important basic skills to obtain new knowledge. >>>correctIf a person do not have a reading skill, it is possible for him to fall behind in such a rapidly changing, competitive world.>>>If a person doesn't have the skill to read, it is posible for him to be left behind in such a rapidly changing , competitive world.To illustrate, one of my cousin had no chance to attend schools during childhood because he could not afford to do that. >>>correctWhenever I visit him, he always tells me to study hard when you are still young. He have had a great success now, but he is so busy running his own business that there is no time for learning
>>>correct
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