Hi Monica

2010-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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It's a beautiful and happy Friday. I hope you are really enjoying a great Friday. As I read an article, I saw the expression of the 'the other day' Can I use that expression with the world of hour, week, month or, last but not least, year. For example,I watched movie the other hour(week, month,or,year) ------------------------------------------------------------------- Please make sure whether these senteces are correct Even after the introduction of E-voting system , there are no increasing number of voters Itis not always credible due to the malfunction of the software of the system. In fact, if this system get virus, or out of order, there are a lot of complex things to do

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Hello there [이름]! You're right!  It's truly an amazing day today.  I'm glad that you are doing awesome! You can only say the other day and the other night.  You can use an hour ago for "hour", last month or a month ago for "month" and last year or a year ago for "year". See you soon! Monica   It's a beautiful and happy Friday. >>>correctI hope you are really enjoying a great Friday.>>>correctAs I read an article, I saw the expression of the 'the other day' >>>As I was reading an article, I saw the phrase"the other day"Can I use that expression with the world of hour, week, month or, last but not least, year. >>>Can I use that phrase in continuation to hour, week, month or year?For example,I watched movie the other hour(week, month,or,year) >>>correct-Please make sure whether these sentences are correct >>>Please make sure if the sentences are correct. >>>Please make sure whether these sentences are correct or not.Even after the introduction of E-voting system , there are no increasing number of voters>>>correctIt is not always credible due to the malfunction of the software of the system.>>>correctIn fact, if this system get virus, or out of order, there are a lot of complex things to do >>>correct

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