Hi Monica

2010-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Monica

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It's been ages Monica How have you been? I had an amzing Chu Seok holidays^^ I hope that you also had a great ones. Anyway,let's talk about some more in a tomorrow class Getting to the point, What is the difference in the meaning in the following two sentences This is no place to be discussing/ to discuss your personal problem --------------------------- Why the second sentence is not acceptable? Working for a large company guarantees me more secure life and provides satisfaction with work A large company guarantees me more secure life and provides satisfaction with work ---------------------------------- Please, make sure whether the following sentece is correct or not Fitness centers that can hardly found in small companies due to their short of money

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Hello [이름]! I'm so glad that you actually enjoyed spending your holiday.  I also had an amazing time with my family during our vacation.  See you tomorrow! Monica It's been ages Monica >>>It's been a while Monica! (most Americans use this expression if they haven't talked or seen each other for a long period of time)How have you been? I had an amazing Chu Seok holidays^^ >>>correctI hope that you also had a great ones. >>>I hope that you also had a great one.Anyway,let's talk about some more in a tomorrow class>>>Anyway, let's talk some more in tomorrow's class >>>>Let's talk more tomorrowGetting to the point, What is the difference in the meaning in the following two sentences>>>>correctThis is no place to be discussing/ to discuss your personal problem >>>If you are talking about the use of the word "DISCUSS",  in both sentences the word discuss was used as a verb. >>>The first sentence means that "this is not the place to discuss or talk about something like a problem" >>>The second sentence means that " to talk about your personal problem".---------------------------Why the second sentence is not acceptable?>>>Why is the second sentence not acceptable?Working for a large company guarantees me more secure life and provides satisfaction with work>>>correctA large company guarantees me more secure life and provides satisfaction with work >>>This sentence is also grammatically correct.  However, not all large companies could guarantee us with our satisfaction in our job.  I guess it's our love or passion with what we are doing that gives us satisfaction and not whether we are working in a large company or not.----------------------------------Please, make sure whether the following sentece is correct or not >>>>correct Fitness centers that can hardly found in small companies due to their short of money >>>Fitness centers are hardly found in small companies due to shortage of money or insufficient fund.

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