Hi, ms Mayleen!

2018-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] In your opinion, what is the most comfortable form of public transportation in your country? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences.^-^ Public transportation in our country has become very convenient for subways, buses and taxis in big cities, and buses and taxis in small cities. In my small cities, buses and taxis are very convenient, and roads, which are infrastructure, are very developed. But public transportation facilities for the disabled seem to be a bit insufficient.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jason!

Thank you for answering your homework.

You did a god job here. I will see then again tomorrow.

Good night!

_T. Mayleen :)

Public transportation in our country has become very convenient for subways, buses and taxis in big cities, and buses and taxis in small cities.
>>> Public transportation in my country has become more convenient having subways, buses, and taxis in big cities, and buses and taxis in small cities.

In my small cities, buses and taxis are very convenient, and roads, which are infrastructure, are very developed.
>>> In small cities, buses and taxis are very convenient, and roads and infrastructures are very well developed.

But public transportation facilities for the disabled seem to be a bit insufficient.

>>> However, public transportation facilities for the disabled seem to be a bit insufficient.

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