Hi, Ms. [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It was so nice to meet you. ^^
Thank you for enrolling in my class.
I am looking forward to guiding you in learning the English language.
I will do my best to help you out! ^^
Don\'t be embarrassed okay?
As long as you\'re trying your best, you should always be proud of yourself.
Here are some corrections to your composition.
See you in our next class! ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think pollution is serious all over the world.
>> I think pollution is a serious issue all around the world.
In particular, I think the pollution of vinyl and plastic products is the most serious.
>> In particular, I think the pollution of vinyl and plastic products are the most serious.
Because, it\'s not rotten.
>> It is because these types of garbage do not decay.
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