Hi, Ms. [Name]!

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Nice to meet you, Miss. [Name]. It was the first time I was so embarrassed to hear it. I look forward to your guidance. What are your thoughts on pollution nowadays? I think pollution is serious all over the world. In particular, I think the pollution of vinyl and plastic products is the most serious. Because, it's not rotten.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It was so nice to meet you. ^^

Thank you for enrolling in my class.

I am looking forward to guiding you in learning the English language.

I will do my best to help you out! ^^

Don\'t be embarrassed okay?

As long as you\'re trying your best, you should always be proud of yourself.

Here are some corrections to your composition.

See you in our next class! ^^


~~t. Ally



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I think pollution is serious all over the world.

>> I think pollution is a serious issue all around the world.

 In particular, I think the pollution of vinyl and plastic products is the most serious.
>> In particular, I think the pollution of vinyl and plastic products are the most serious.


 Because, it\'s not rotten.

>> It is because these types of garbage do not decay.

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