Hi, Ms. [Name]!

2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer this question in 3 sentences: What would you like to get this Christmas? I am not a devoted Christian like Filipino,I am a polytheist. There is nothing I want to receive as a gift, and I hope Ms. [Name] can give me a secret recipe for good conversation in English. And I hope everyone around me is healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hey there Teacher Son!

Thank you for sending your composition.

I want to learn more about what a Polytheist is. ^^

Could you tell me more about it in class?

See you!

~~t. Ally

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I am not a devoted Christian like Filipino,I am a polytheist.

>> Unlike Filipinos, I am not a devoted Christian. I am a Polytheist.

There is nothing I want to receive as a gift, and I hope Ms. [Name] can give me a secret recipe for good conversation in English.

>> There is nothing I want to receive as a gift, but I hope Ms. [Name] can give me a secret recipe for engaging good conversation in English.

And I hope everyone around me is healthy.

>> CORRECT!

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