hi my deal sheela.
학생이 쓴 원문
please change these sentences as correct expression.
1. I hava never attended at a conversazione
2. I don't know famous people who beeing in kind of illiterate
3. Funny movie and good music gratify me enough
4. Proper exercise is beneficial to us.
5. He looks his real mind implied when he was saying/
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you so much for alloting some of your time on writing something in your composition board. I hope that you will continue to be active on sharing your thoughts to me. I will be very willing to respond to your letters.
By the way, I made some corrections on your composition.
Please take a look and study:
please change these sentences as correct expression.>> Please change these sentences to correct expressions. ( Capitalization. Use of Prepositions)1. I hava never attended at a conversazione>> I have never attended a conversazione. ( Spelling, Use of Prepositions, Punctuation Mark)
2. I don\'t know famous people who beeing in kind of illiterate>> I don\'t know those famous people who are being kind of illiterate. (Sentence Construction, Punctuation Mark) 3. Funny movie and good music gratify me enough>> Funny movies and good music gratify me enough. (Plural Noun, Punctuation Mark) 4. Proper exercise is beneficial to us.>> Correct! Very Good! :)5. He looks his real mind implied when he was saying/
>> He seems to be on his mind with what he is saying. (Sentence Construction)
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