Hi my dear Sheela~

2012-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Sheela. I am also sorry about the last friday. Could you tell that i said I am sorry to was rude to teacher Dominic ? From next time , If I can't study , I will register cancel for the day's study . And my resolution for this year are like these. 1. I will speak to english for free talking freely. 2. I will save $10000 for this year. 3. I will get a certificate that is called "Engineer Information Processing" 4. I will get recognized my programing ability from company. I can do it . And I want you keep being happy always.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름], Thank you for being so understanding.T.Dominic is very kind, she said it was okay:). Anyway, I also wish you more happiness this year because you deserve it. See you later! T. Sheela I am also sorry about the last friday. >> I am sorry about last Friday. Could you tell that i said I am sorry to was rude to teacher Dominic ?>> Could you tell T. Dominic that I\'m sorry for being rude?From next time , If I can\'t study , I will register cancel for the day\'s study . >> Next time, if I can\'t study, I will cancel the class.And my resolution for this year are like these.>> My resolutions for this year are the following.1. I will speak to english for free talking freely.>> I will freely speak in English.2. I will save $10000 for this year.>> Correct.3. I will get a certificate that is called \"Engineer Information Processing\">> Correct.4. I will get recognized my programing ability from company.>> My programming ability will be recognized by the company.I can do it . >> Correct.And I want you keep being happy always. >> I also want you to be happy always.  

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