Hi my dear Sheela~

2012-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Sheela ~ I wrote the answers for homework 2days. And it is seperated as each day's site. Because I wrote the answer for wednesday study at the last afternoon. But that was deleted . I think the reason is that I wrote too long writing. So I entered it again with fixing little. I am sorry. And thank you for writing you wrote explaining about the word I missed in our study. I got it! And I always appreciate your teaching. ^^ These are for homework last day. No1. A ( has to clean his room and do his homework ) No2. B ( ran down the beach after her sister ) No3. A ( sang loudly ) No4. A ( played with the ball of yam ) No5. B ( are going to try out for the track team )

강사 첨삭

Hi theree! Thank you for answering another homework. Keep it up:)   Hi Sheela ~ I wrote the answers for homework 2days. >>Hi Sheela! I wrote the answers for my homework for two days.And it is seperated as each day\'s site. >>It is separated each day.Because I wrote the answer for wednesday study at the last afternoon. >>This is because  answered my Wednesday\'s homework yesterday.But that was deleted . >>CORRECT  I think the reason is that I wrote too long writing.>>I think the reason is that I wrote too long.So I entered it again with fixing little. >>So I need to enter it again.I am sorry. >>CORRECT  And thank you for writing you wrote explaining about the I missed in our study. >>And thank you for writing a note explaining about the word that I missed.I got it! And I always appreciate your teaching. ^^>>CORRECTThese are for homework last day.No1. A ( has to clean his room and do his homework ) >>CORRECTNo2. B ( ran down the beach after her sister ) >>CORRECTNo3. A ( sang loudly ) >>CORRECTNo4. A ( played with the ball of yam ) >>CORRECTNo5. B ( are going to try out for the track team ) >>CORRECT

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