Hi, my dear sheela~

2012-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Sheela~ I made these sentences for the homework. Thank you. 1. Demure She looks like a demure girl because she is wearing a white blouse with long skirt. 2.Imply He often imply that his heart what loving her through action like giving present to her. 3.Dispute Workers who working the company sometimes have a dispute about their authority to have enough rest time with board of directors. 4.Conclusion The conclusion of story "Romeo & Juliet" is tragedy. Because principal boy who to misunderstand the fact that she died has been dead. 5.Sustain The teacher sustains the students to keep studying hardly for themselves

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Hello there,  Good afternoon! Thank you for doing your homework. I made few corrections for you. Please check them out and be guided. See you later!   Hi Sheela~ >>CorrectI made these sentences for the homework. Thank you. >>Correct1. DemureShe looks like a demure girl because she is wearing a white blouse with long skirt.>>Correct2.ImplyHe often imply that his heart what loving her through action like giving present to her. >>He often implies that he loves her through his actions like giving giving her present. 3.Dispute Workers who working the company sometimes have a dispute about their authority to have enough rest time with board of directors. >>Workers in the company sometimes have dispute about their right to have enough rest time with their board of directors.4.Conclusion >>CorrectThe conclusion of story \"Romeo & Juliet\" is a tragedy. >>Correct Because principal boy who to misunderstand the fact that she died has been dead. >>Because the main character misunderstood her death. 5.Sustain >>CorrectThe teacher sustains the students to keep studying hardly for themselves. >>The teacher sustains the students strength to study harder by themselves.

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