Hi my dear Sheela~

2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Sheela ~ It is so cold ~ Below are my answers for the homework. 1.Avowed intent We have got a our avowed intent that we will get more better outcome than last year when we started working at the first day of this year 2.Beyond one's wildest dreams When I met her, She said "The movie i wanted to see is beyond my wildest dreams. It was very good."

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Howdy, [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. I hope that you will continue writing on your composition board. Please keep yourself warm since it\'s very cold in Korea. I made some corrections on your sentences below. Please take a look and study: Hi Sheela ~ It is so cold ~ >> Hi Sheela! It is so cold here. (Punctuation mark, Missing word)Below are my answers for the homework. >> Correct! :)1.Avowed intent We have got a our avowed intent that we will get more better outcome than last year when we started working at the first day of this year>> We had our avowed intent that we will get a better outcome in our work for this year. (Sentence Construction)2.Beyond oe\'s wildest dreams When I met her, She said \"The movie i wanted to see is beyond my wildest dreams. It was very good.\" >> When I met her, she said, \"The movie that I have watched was beyond my wildest dreams. It was very good.\" (Sentence Construction)

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