Hi my dear Sheela.

2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Sheela. Fisrst of all, I am so sorry. I have been rude again. Forgive me please. Actually there was a party with coworkers last night. We had started drinking at 6 : 30 pm. So I thought that I can receive your calling. But I became intoxicated, and when you called me, i didn't know it. So I couldn't your calling. I am sorry Sheela. These are my answers for the homework. 1.Do you want to come to the PLAYGROUND with us? -> A. Noun 2.Mandy was so happy she SKIPPED down the street. -> B.Verb 3.We hung SHINY decorations on our Christmas tree. -> C. Adjective 4.Carlos can run FASTER than anyone in our school. -> D.Adverb 5.Please get me a bunch of RIPE bananas when you go to the store. -> C. Adjective

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for spending some of your time answering your homework and leaving a short message for me. I  really appreciate it. ^^, I hope that you will continue to write something in your composition board. By the way, I made some modifications in your letter. The answer key is also given below. Please read and study the following:   Hi Sheela. >> Correct! :) Fisrst of all, I am so sorry. >> Correct! :) I have been rude again.>> Correct! :) Forgive me please.>> Correct! :) Actually there was a party with coworkers last night. >> Actually, I attended a party with my co-workers last night.  (Sentence Construction) We had started drinking at 6 : 30 pm.>> Correct! :) So I thought that I can receive your calling.>> So I thought that I can receive your call. (Direct Object) But I became intoxicated, and when you called me, i didn\'t know it. >> Correct! :) So I couldn\'t your calling.>> I did not notice your call. I am sorry Sheela.>> Correct! :) These are my answers for the homework.>> Correct! :) 1.Do you want to come to the PLAYGROUND with us?-> A. Noun>> Correct! :) 2.Mandy was so happy she SKIPPED down the street.-> B.Verb>> Correct! :) 3.We hung SHINY decorations on our Christmas tree.-> C. Adjective>> Correct! :) 4.Carlos can run FASTER than anyone in our school.-> D.Adverb>> Correct! :) 5.Please get me a bunch of RIPE bananas when you go to the store.-> C. Adjective >> Correct! :) See you in class! 

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