Hi, my dear Sheela.

2012-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Hi Sheela.How was your holidays? I was a good. But I had too much rest times. I like to have some rest time. But I am also worried that I became to be a lazy . Because I almost don't study whenever I have some rest time . Actually , sometimes I have regret my action what i did before. I was a lazy person, so i think I had spend meaningless much time . And now, I want to be a diligent person. Anyway~! These are my answers for my homework. 1.protocol -> It is made long times ago that protocol for many people over the world. 2.gumptious -> The world always wants gumptious people.Therefore We should be changed as a more active person. 3.compliant -> To compliant for Parents is a our natural duty.

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Happy Wednesday, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework and leaving a mesage for me. I think we were just the same.I had a very unbusy days during the holiday. I missed going to work, because I felt like I had a meaningless days.Anyway,It\'s nice to be back.See you later! Please take a look on the corrections I have made below.    Hi Sheela.How was your holidays? >> Hi Sheela. How was your holiday vacation? (Spacing, Noun)I was a good. But I had too much rest times. >> Mine was good and I had a lot of time resting. (Sentence Construction)I like to have some rest time. >> Correct! But I am also worried that I became to be a lazy. >> But I\'m also worried that I may become a lazy person. (Sentence Construction)Because I almost don\'t study whenever I have some rest time. >> Correct! Actually , sometimes I have regret my action what i did before. >> Actually, I sometimes regret my past actions. (Sentence Construction)I was a lazy person, so i think I had spend meaningless much time. >> I was a lazy person so I think I have spent a lot of meaningless time.And now, I want to be a diligent person. >> Correct! Anyway~!These are my answers for my homework. >> Anyway, these are my answers for my homework. (Punctuation mark, Capitalization)1.protocol-> It is made long times ago that protocol for many people over the world.>> That protocol was made long time ago for people to follow.  (Sentence Construction)2.gumptious-> The world always wants gumptious people.Therefore We should be changed as a more active person.>> The world always wants gumptious people. Therefore, we should be actve individuals.  (Sentence Construction)3.compliant-> To compliant for Parents is a our natural duty. >> To be compliant to our parents is our common duty.  (Sentence Construction, Word Choice)

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