Hi, my dear Sheela.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Sheela.How was your holidays?
I was a good. But I had too much rest times.
I like to have some rest time.
But I am also worried that I became to be a lazy .
Because I almost don't study whenever I have some rest time .
Actually , sometimes I have regret my action what i did before.
I was a lazy person, so i think I had spend meaningless much time .
And now, I want to be a diligent person. Anyway~!
These are my answers for my homework.
1.protocol
-> It is made long times ago that protocol for many people over the world.
2.gumptious
-> The world always wants gumptious people.Therefore We should be changed as a more active person.
3.compliant
-> To compliant for Parents is a our natural duty.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework and leaving a mesage for me. I think we were just the same.I had a very unbusy days during the holiday. I missed going to work, because I felt like I had a meaningless days.Anyway,It\'s nice to be back.See you later!
Please take a look on the corrections I have made below.
Hi Sheela.How was your holidays?
>> Hi Sheela. How was your holiday vacation? (Spacing, Noun)I was a good. But I had too much rest times.
>> Mine was good and I had a lot of time resting. (Sentence Construction)I like to have some rest time.
>> Correct! But I am also worried that I became to be a lazy.
>> But I\'m also worried that I may become a lazy person. (Sentence Construction)Because I almost don\'t study whenever I have some rest time.
>> Correct! Actually , sometimes I have regret my action what i did before.
>> Actually, I sometimes regret my past actions. (Sentence Construction)I was a lazy person, so i think I had spend meaningless much time.
>> I was a lazy person so I think I have spent a lot of meaningless time.And now, I want to be a diligent person.
>> Correct!
Anyway~!These are my answers for my homework.
>> Anyway, these are my answers for my homework. (Punctuation mark, Capitalization)1.protocol-> It is made long times ago that protocol for many people over the world.>> That protocol was made long time ago for people to follow. (Sentence Construction)2.gumptious-> The world always wants gumptious people.Therefore We should be changed as a more active person.>> The world always wants gumptious people. Therefore, we should be actve individuals. (Sentence Construction)3.compliant-> To compliant for Parents is a our natural duty.
>> To be compliant to our parents is our common duty. (Sentence Construction, Word Choice)
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