Hi my dear Sheela

2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hi Sheela. It's a tired monday. But I will have a good day. Have a good day Sheela. These are my answers for my homework. 1.Seemly -> Hamburger is seemly food to solve hungry in short time. -> John is seemly person for the award because his performance is greatest of them. 2.Concept -> The concept of aim is last state after getting oneself's some wish. -> The concept of emotion is feeling kind of like happy, sad, rage, enjoyableness and so on 3. Discernment -> The person who having outstanding discernment has become a fashion designer -> Great leader must have a discernment to distinguish a faithful subject

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Hi [이름]! I\'m impressed. It\'s a rather difficult homework and you did your absolute best to answer this.  Keep up the good work. Here are my corrections.   T. Sheela   Hi Sheela. It\'s a tired monday. >>Hi Sheela. It\'s a tiring Monday.  But I will have a good day. >>Correct!  Have a good day Sheela. >>Correct!These are my answers for my homework. >>Correct!1.Seemly-> Hamburger is seemly food to solve hungry in short time. >>Hamburger is the most seemly food to pass hunger for a short time.-> John is seemly person for the award because his performance is greatest of them. >>John is seemly the person for the award because his performance is the best among the others.2.Concept-> The concept of aim is last state after getting oneself\'s some wish. (I don\'t exactly know what you mean so I listed down an unrelated sample sentence below.) >>The concept of aim is forgotten once a person believes that he/she has no need to achieve anything. >>The concept of aim is taken for granted by those who have no purpose.-> The concept of emotion is feeling kind of like happy, sad, rage, enjoyableness and so on >>The concept of emotion is feeling happy, sad, rage, bliss and so on3. Discernment-> The person who having outstanding discernment has become a fashion designer >>The person who has outstanding discernment on art and creativity, became a fashion designer.-> Great leader must have a discernment to distinguish a faithful subject >>Great leaders must have good discernment to distinguish a faithful subject.

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