Hi my dear Sheela
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Sheela. It's a tired monday. But I will have a good day. Have a good day Sheela.
These are my answers for my homework.
1.Seemly
-> Hamburger is seemly food to solve hungry in short time.
-> John is seemly person for the award because his performance is greatest of them.
2.Concept
-> The concept of aim is last state after getting oneself's some wish.
-> The concept of emotion is feeling kind of like happy, sad, rage, enjoyableness and so on
3. Discernment
-> The person who having outstanding discernment has become a fashion designer
-> Great leader must have a discernment to distinguish a faithful subject
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Hi [이름]! I\'m impressed. It\'s a rather difficult homework and you did your absolute best to answer this. Keep up the good work.
Here are my corrections.
T. Sheela
Hi Sheela. It\'s a tired monday.
>>Hi Sheela. It\'s a tiring Monday.
But I will have a good day.
>>Correct!
Have a good day Sheela.
>>Correct!These are my answers for my homework.
>>Correct!1.Seemly-> Hamburger is seemly food to solve hungry in short time.
>>Hamburger is the most seemly food to pass hunger for a short time.-> John is seemly person for the award because his performance is greatest of them.
>>John is seemly the person for the award because his performance is the best among the others.2.Concept-> The concept of aim is last state after getting oneself\'s some wish. (I don\'t exactly know what you mean so I listed down an unrelated sample sentence below.)
>>The concept of aim is forgotten once a person believes that he/she has no need to achieve anything.
>>The concept of aim is taken for granted by those who have no purpose.-> The concept of emotion is feeling kind of like happy, sad, rage, enjoyableness and so on
>>The concept of emotion is feeling happy, sad, rage, bliss and so on3. Discernment-> The person who having outstanding discernment has become a fashion designer
>>The person who has outstanding discernment on art and creativity, became a fashion designer.-> Great leader must have a discernment to distinguish a faithful subject
>>Great leaders must have good discernment to distinguish a faithful subject.
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