Hi my dear Sheela

2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Hi~Sheela. Good Wednesday. These are my answers for my homework. 1. acquire -> I acquire various information from intertnet site. -> People acquires manner from their parents. 2. foiling -> foiling is one kind of decoration shape. -> Baby girl usually like a foiling on something they have. 3. Cherished -> what is your long-cherished hope? -> The present what he gave her has been cherished to her for a long time.

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Howdy, [이름]! How\'s your day today?Are you going to have an overtime work? I hope not!. Well, here are the correct answer. T.Sheela   Hi~Sheela. Good Wednesday. >> Hi Sheela. Good Wednesday. (Unnecessary punctuation mark) These are my answers for my homework. >> Correct! :)1. acquire-> I acquire various information from intertnet site. >> I acquire various information from the internet site. (article)-> People acquires manner from their parents. >> All of us acquire our manners from our parents, (Sentence Construction)2. foiling-> foiling is one kind of decoration shape. >> Foling is a kind of decoration shape. (Capitalization) -> Baby girl usually like a foiling on something they have. >> The baby girl usually cries when someone does foiling on what she wants to have. (Sentence Construction)3. Cherished-> what is your long-cherished hope? >> What is your long cherished hope? (Capitalization) -> The present what he gave her has been cherished to her for a long time. >> The present he had given her has been cherished for a long time. (Sentence Construction)

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