Hi my dear Sheela
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~Sheela. Good Wednesday.
These are my answers for my homework.
1. acquire
-> I acquire various information from intertnet site.
-> People acquires manner from their parents.
2. foiling
-> foiling is one kind of decoration shape.
-> Baby girl usually like a foiling on something they have.
3. Cherished
-> what is your long-cherished hope?
-> The present what he gave her has been cherished to her for a long time.
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Howdy, [이름]!
How\'s your day today?Are you going to have an overtime work? I hope not!. Well, here are the correct answer.
T.Sheela
Hi~Sheela. Good Wednesday.
>> Hi Sheela. Good Wednesday. (Unnecessary punctuation mark) These are my answers for my homework.
>> Correct! :)1. acquire-> I acquire various information from intertnet site.
>> I acquire various information from the internet site. (article)-> People acquires manner from their parents.
>> All of us acquire our manners from our parents, (Sentence Construction)2. foiling-> foiling is one kind of decoration shape.
>> Foling is a kind of decoration shape. (Capitalization) -> Baby girl usually like a foiling on something they have.
>> The baby girl usually cries when someone does foiling on what she wants to have. (Sentence Construction)3. Cherished-> what is your long-cherished hope?
>> What is your long cherished hope? (Capitalization) -> The present what he gave her has been cherished to her for a long time.
>> The present he had given her has been cherished for a long time. (Sentence Construction)
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