hi my dear sheela~

2011-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

hi my dear sheela. Not my deal. I am sorry. I didn't know that I wrote like that sentence. haha; The quote you wrote is interesting to me although it is difficult. So thank you ~ ^^ These are the homework you gaved me. 1. prosperous -> The Roma of ancient was the one of the most prosperous country. 2. auspicious -> The magpie is a auspicious bird in the korea. 3. felicity -> The warm house , delicious foods and my precious family are felicity to me. 4. cognition -> The speed of sunshine is out of human's cognition. 5. endeavor -> It is my endeavor to study english for my better future.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear [이름], That\'s okay you might had accidentaly pressed the wrong letter when you wrote that.:) Below are my corrections. T.Sheela   hi my dear sheela. >>Hi my dear Sheela. Not my deal. I am sorry. I didn\'t know that I wrote like that sentence. haha; >>Not my deal Sheela. I am sorry for the mistake, I didn\'t know that I wrote that sentence.hahaha.The quote you wrote is interesting to me although it is difficult. >>The quote you wrote is interesting to me.Although it is difficult to understand.So thank you ~ ^^>>Correct!These are the homework you gaved me.>>This is the homework you gave me.1. prosperous -> The Roma of ancient was the one of the most prosperous country.>>The ancient Roma was one of the most prosperous country.2. auspicious-> The magpie is a auspicious bird in the korea.>>The magpie is an auspicious bird in Korea.3. felicity-> The warm house , delicious foods and my precious family are felicity to me.>>A warm house with delicious food and my precious family are my felicity.4. cognition-> The speed of sunshine is out of human\'s cognition.>>Correct!5. endeavor -> It is my endeavor to study english for my better future. >>Correct!

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