Hi my dude Wendy.

2013-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Hi my dude Wendy. How is it going? I had been so busy to handle my tasks. I should be a multiplyer. I do two jobs at once. Now, I am so exausted and I can't move parts of my body. But, something is going up from bottom of my heart because I'm done my job by the limited schedual. Anyway, I did my best what I have to. See you later.

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Hi there. How\'s it going? I feel sleepy now. What did you eat for dinner? I hope you\'re having a blast. See you tomorrow. --Teacher Wendy Hi my dude Wendy.>>  CorrectHow is it going? >> Correct I had been so busy to handle my tasks. >> Correct I should be a multiplyer. >> I should multi-task. I do two jobs at once. >> Correct Now, I am so exausted and I can\'t move parts of my body. >> Now, I am so exausted and I can\'t move some parts of my body.  But, something is going up from bottom of my heart because I\'m done my job by the limited schedual. >> But, something is going up from the bottom of my heart because I\'m done doing my job aith a limited schedule. Anyway, I did my best what I have to. >> Anyway, i did my best in what I have to do.See you later. >> Correct

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