hi :) my homework
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Q, If you are given the chance to have a two-week vacation anywhere in Asia, where do you want to go? Why?
A,
I want to go to Thailand. Because there are many delicious food and massage shops. If I go to Thailand, everyday I want to get a massage and go to a pretty cafe to drink tea. I want to enjoy a rest there without thinking.
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Hello Eun Byul!
Thank you for making your very first homework. You did great! Keep it up and have a wonderful day ahead.
~~Teacher Kate
>>> I want to go to Thailand because there are a lot of delicious foods and massage shops there.
2. If I go to Thailand, everyday I want to get a massage and go to a pretty cafe to drink tea.
>>>If I go to Thailand, I want to get a massage and go to cozy cafes to drink tea everyday.
3. I want to enjoy a rest there without thinking.
>>>I want to enjoy my rest time there without thinking.
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