Hi~~~♥ my lovely teacher, Louise :-)
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Today I went to my university although we had such a strong TYPHOON because of our professors. They are always really STRICT and STUBBORN and have a red-tape mind.
As time went by, the typhoon was getting STRONGER and STRONGER. Moreover, about 2pm it brought a gale as well which I have never met before.
I RECKON the weather makes me ABSOULUTELY SHATTERED.
Anyway, I attended all my classes, so now I feel a little bit proud of myself.
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What did you do today? Are you in a monsoon season now?
I heard of some stories of Philippines from my sister. 3 weeks ago, she was studying there for 6 weeks but actually she intended to stay there for 8 weeks. Suddenly, my grandfather passed away, so she had no choice at the moment.
When she came back to Korea, she said the weather of Philippines was usually rainy and cloudy, humid. Also, there were loads of mosquitoes and some bugs which she doesn't know their names.
However, she told me, people were really kind and friendly. Cebu is the most beautiful city she has ever been to. There were lots of thing to do and enjoy. During staying there, she was completely relaxed and over the moon.
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Hello there! I had fun reading your composition because you wrote in an entertaining way. I like the way you capitalize words when you want to emphasize something especially when you want to express your dislike. Just don\'t overdo it..kk..I am glad that you are well and I hope that the typhoon passes by your place fast..Here in my place, we always have rainshowers and your sister is right..about the weather and the people and the bugs too..kk See you in class!T. Louise
Today I went to my university although we had such a strong TYPHOON because of our professors.>>Today, I went to my university although we had such a strong TYPHOON because of our professors. They are always really STRICT and STUBBORN and have a red-tape mind.
>>They are always really STRICT and STUBBORN and love red tape.[I don\'t think you can use it as an adjective.]As time went by, the typhoon was getting STRONGER and STRONGER.>> correct Moreover, about 2pm it brought a gale as well which I have never met before.>> Moreover, at about 2 pm, it brought a gale as well, a thing I\'ve never seen or experienced before.I RECKON the weather makes me ABSOULUTELY SHATTERED.>> correctAnyway, I attended all my classes, so now I feel a little bit proud of myself.>> correctWhat did you do today? Are you in a monsoon season now?>> correct
I heard of some stories of Philippines from my sister.>> I heard some stories about the Philippines from my sister. 3 weeks ago, she was studying there for 6 weeks but actually she intended to stay there for 8 weeks.>> She had studied for 6 weeks there but she had intended to stay for 8 weeks. Suddenly, my grandfather passed away, so she had no choice at the moment.>> But suddenly, my grandfather passed away, so she had no choice at that timebut to go home.When she came back to Korea, she said the weather of Philippines was usually rainy and cloudy, humid.>> When she came back to Korea,she said the weather in the Philippines was usually rainy and cloudy and humid. Also, there were loads of mosquitoes and some bugs which she doesn\'t know their names.>> Also, there were loads of mosquitoes and some bugs whose names she did not know.However, she told me, people were really kind and friendly.>> correct Cebu is the most beautiful city she has ever been to.>> correct There were lots of thing to do and enjoy. >> correctDuring staying there, she was completely relaxed and over the moon. >> While she was staying there, she was completely relaxed and over the moon.or>> During her stay there,she was completely relaxed and over the moon.
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