Hi, my new teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, i hered my privious teacher resigned the company so that i will study with new teacher from monday. i hope we make a good and valuable class.
H/W : Have you ever collected coupons for discounts?
Generally, women tend to collect coupons because they like shopping.But, men have a opposite thougth about shopping. I am also a common man, so i dont like shopping and collect coupons for discounts natually.
But i have a main reason about refusing coupons. I think that it is a trick of company to give a coupons. Fisrt, we spend money to use coupons, not buying necessary goods. Secound, Our choise is limited because all of goods are not applyed for coupons. In other words, we are not able to choose goods with ourselves will, just we shoul follow companies will. I dont like being contolled by small and cheep coupons.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear!^^ Thank you for kindly accepting me. I appreciate your effort in our class. To improve your English ability further, please take note of the following corrections. Don\'t worry, I will do my best to help you study English and to maintain a happy and valuable class. Take care and enjoy the night away. See you in tomorrow\'s class.
~Teacher Faye
Good morning, i hered my privious teacher resigned the company so that i will study with new teacher from monday.
>>Good Morning! I heard that my previous teacher resigned from the company so I have to study with a new teacher from Monday.
hope we make a good and valuable class.
>>I hope we can make a good an valuable class. H/W : Have you ever collected coupons for discounts?Generally, women tend to collect coupons because they like shopping.
>>Correct!
But, men have a opposite thougth about shopping.
>>But men have an opposite thought about shopping.
I am also a common man, so i dont like shopping and collect coupons for discounts natually.
>>I\'m just like another man, I don\'t naturallly like shopping and collecting coupons for discounts.But i have a main reason about refusing coupons.
>>However, I have another bigger reason for refusing coupons.
I think that it is a trick of company to give a coupons.
>>I think that giving away coupons is only a company\'s trick.
Fisrt, we spend money to use coupons, not buying necessary goods.
>>First, we spend money in using coupons not really buying necessary goods.
Secound, Our choise is limited because all of goods are not applyed for coupons.
>>Second, our choices are limited because the coupons do not apply to all goods.
In other words, we are not able to choose goods with ourselves will, just we shoul follow companies will.
>>In other words, we are not able to choose goods through our own will. Instead, the companies\' will are the ones followed.
I dont like being contolled by small and cheep coupons.
>>I don\'t like being controlled by small and cheap coupons.
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