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Q: If a foreigner asks you about any famous landmark or tourist spot in Korea, what places would you recommend?
If I have to recommend to foreigner I would you recommend at indoor amuse park.
There are so many exciting out door amuse park all of the world.
when I aboard I went to lots amuse parks such as Universal studio and Disney land. I was excited and enjoyed when I have been to Los Angeles but suddenly It started raining so most of people and I couldn't enjoy at that time.
In Korea There is a indoor amuse park and very well known for the world and even if bad weather or cold It doesn't matter because of indoor.
I'm sure that if they go to the park they could be impressive.
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Enjoy the rest of your night, take care and I hope you can have time to go to the theater to watch a movie?^^, even without a boyfriend. >_<
~ T. Christine >_<
Q: If a foreigner asks you about any famous landmark or tourist spot in Korea, what places would you recommend?If I have to recommend to foreigner I would you recommend at indoor amuse park.
>> If I have to recommend a good place to a foreigner, I will recommend an indoor amusement park.There are so many exciting out door amuse park all of the world.
>> There are so many exciting outdoor amusements parks all over the world.when I aboard I went to lots amuse parks such as Universal studio and Disney land.
>> When I went abroad, I went to lots of amusement parks such as the Universal Studios and in Disneyland.
I was excited and enjoyed when I have been to Los Angeles but suddenly It started raining so most of people and I couldn't enjoy at that time.
>> I was excited and enjoyed my time back when I have been to Los Angeles but suddenly it started raining that time so we could not enjoy much.In Korea There is a indoor amuse park and very well known for the world and even if bad weather or cold It doesn't matter because of indoor.
>> In Korea, there is a world-renowned indoor amusement park, even if the weather is bad or freezing, it doesn뭪 matter because it is indoors. I'm sure that if they go to the park they could be impressive.
>> I am sure that people who visit that place will be impressed.
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