Hi, My teacher Cam.

2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi,Cam. I'm [이름]^^ Last weekend, I watched the movie "pusanhang" with my husband. The movie is disgusting for me. I can't understand why people like the movie. How was your last weekend, Cam?? I write message to you at the first time! I always read your comment after class and thanks for your coaching. But I don't have enough time. I am very busy at home or company. So, a difficult homework is stress for me.ㅠㅠ Please give me an easy homework, Teacher~~ I downroaded "Modern Family" for English study. I'll do it as your study tip! I look forward to our class. I can't speak Engligh well but you give me energy. Always thank you so much!

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Hi there Miss [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework... I really appreciate your time and effort in doing so. And Miss [이름], don\'t say your not good in English because YOU ARE! I do believe in you so I want you to believe in yourself like I always do. You are a very good and diligent student my dear, I hope you know that... Don\'t worry I will give you easier homework...^^ Take care always my dear Miss [이름] and have a good night... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hi,Cam. >>correctI\'m [이름]^^>>correctLast weekend, I watched the movie \"pusanhang\" with my husband. >>correctThe movie is disgusting for me. >>correctI can\'t understand why people like the movie. >>correctHow was your last weekend, Cam??>>correct OR: How was your weekend Cam?I write message to you at the first time! >>This is the first time I have written to you.I always read your comment after class and thanks for your coaching. >>correctBut I don\'t have enough time. >>correctI am very busy at home or company. >>correct OR: I am always busy at home or at work.So, a difficult homework is stress for me.ㅠㅠ >>So having a difficult homework is stressful for me.Please give me an easy homework, Teacher~~>>correctI downroaded \"Modern Family\" for English study. >>I downloaded the \"Modern Family\" for English study.I\'ll do it as your study tip!>>correctI look forward to our class. >>correctI can\'t speak Engligh well but you give me energy.>>correctAlways thank you so much! >>correct

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