Hi, My teacher Cam.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Cam.
I'm [이름]^^
Last weekend, I watched the movie "pusanhang" with my husband.
The movie is disgusting for me.
I can't understand why people like the movie.
How was your last weekend, Cam??
I write message to you at the first time!
I always read your comment after class and thanks for your coaching.
But I don't have enough time.
I am very busy at home or company.
So, a difficult homework is stress for me.ㅠㅠ
Please give me an easy homework, Teacher~~
I downroaded "Modern Family" for English study.
I'll do it as your study tip!
I look forward to our class.
I can't speak Engligh well but you give me energy.
Always thank you so much!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름]!
Thank you so much for doing your homework... I really appreciate your time and effort in doing so.
And Miss [이름], don\'t say your not good in English because YOU ARE! I do believe in you so I want you to believe in yourself like I always do.
You are a very good and diligent student my dear, I hope you know that...
Don\'t worry I will give you easier homework...^^
Take care always my dear Miss [이름] and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hi,Cam.
>>correctI\'m [이름]^^>>correctLast weekend, I watched the movie \"pusanhang\" with my husband.
>>correctThe movie is disgusting for me.
>>correctI can\'t understand why people like the movie.
>>correctHow was your last weekend, Cam??>>correct
OR: How was your weekend Cam?I write message to you at the first time!
>>This is the first time I have written to you.I always read your comment after class and thanks for your coaching.
>>correctBut I don\'t have enough time.
>>correctI am very busy at home or company.
>>correct
OR: I am always busy at home or at work.So, a difficult homework is stress for me.ㅠㅠ
>>So having a difficult homework is stressful for me.Please give me an easy homework, Teacher~~>>correctI downroaded \"Modern Family\" for English study.
>>I downloaded the \"Modern Family\" for English study.I\'ll do it as your study tip!>>correctI look forward to our class.
>>correctI can\'t speak Engligh well but you give me energy.>>correctAlways thank you so much!
>>correct
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