Hi my teacher..check my homework

2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Honestly, I really know about that. But according to the media and the newspaper, our country seems like the condition which has been going to the recession from 2 years ago. In addition, the older people's number is rising, but the young people's number is decreasing. In other words, it means that the person's number which can work is decreasing. The above seems the future of our country is not good. I'm sorry, my home is running late. I had been a funny time with my children. So I didn't know that the time has gone so fast during from saturday to sunday. How about you? did you have fun? Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! How are you? I was busy last weekend because I had classes.

I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed your weekend with your children.

See you later. ^^

~~May~~

Honestly, I really know about that.

>> CORRECT
But according to the media and the newspaper, our country seems like the condition which has been going to the recession from 2 years ago.

>> According to the news, our country was in recession 2 years ago.
In addition, the older people\'s number is rising, but the young people\'s number is decreasing.

>> In addition, the birth rate is decreasing.
In other words, it means that the person\'s number which can work is decreasing.

>> The employment rate is also declining.
The above seems the future of our country is not good.

>> These reasons are not good for the country\'s success.

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