Hi~ new class's first homework!

2014-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

학생이 쓴 원문

Half a year ago, I started to learn English free talking through an internet lecture. Because many people said that the teacher of that lecture were good at teaching English like teaching toddler. So, I studied that. I watched that lecture every single day. It was helpful to improve my pronounciation, but still I don't have any confidence or improvement abouut talking.T.T Anyway, now I think that was the first effort to increase my free talking skill.

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름],
You have develop good writing skills. You organize your thought in a meaningful way. Good job!
I just hope you can keep your momentum till you become that fluent person that you want to be.
Teacher Lexi
 
Half a year ago, I started to learn English free talking through an internet lecture.
>>Correct :)
Because many people said that the teacher of that lecture were good at teaching English like teaching toddler.
>>Correct :)
So, I studied that. I watched that lecture every single day.
>>Correct :)
 It was helpful to improve my pronounciation, but still I don\'t have any confidence or improvement abouut talking.T.T
>>Correct :) (spelling check - pronunciation, about)
>>OR: 
It was helpful to improve my pronounciation, but still I don\'t have any confidence or improvement when speaking.
Anyway, now I think that was the first effort to increase my free talking skill.
>>Correct :)

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