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2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Should everyone learn to speak a second language? Why? Explain your answer. I don't think everyone needs to learn a second language. However, it has become important to learn more foreign languages in a global society. Especially, for young people who will live in the future, learning more foreign languages will help them live.

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I don\'t think everyone needs to learn a second language.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I don\'t think everyone should learn a second language.
However, it has become important to learn more foreign languages in a global society.

>> However, it has been important to learn more foreign languages in the global society.
Especially, for young people who will live in the future, learning more foreign languages will help them live.

>> Especially, for young the people who will live in the future, learning more foreign languages will help them live.

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