Hi Nica

2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Hi Nica. Wow! I am surprised by the news that you sing. So cool. You should also keep it up. I can't sing. Because you know I have a stuffy nose. My voice is not clear. And i am bad at singing high -pitched tones. When you put your performance in YouTube , I will see it certainly. Have a happy time to practice ^^ Below are my answers for my homework. 1. walk through -> If we want to get there, we have to walk through many buildings. 2. mess up -> To do overly something can mess up to achieve goal. 3. go up against -> In order to get success we go up against difficulty and fear about fail. 4. enough said -> She nag him continuously , so he said "Enough said". 5. loosen up -> The singer tried to loosen up before the performance.

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Hi [이름]!! Thank you for wishing me good on my singing and practice. I will tell you if our performance is at YouTube already.^^ Wow!! You did great on you homework. I\'m so proud of you. Keep up the good work!^^ You really are getting better everyday.^^ I provided you some corrections on some of your sentences. You can just check them. Have a great weekend. Take care!!^^ __Teacher Nica__     Hi Nica. Wow! I am surprised by the news that you sing. >> Wow! I am surprised on the news taht you sing. So cool. >> That is so cool.You should also keep it up. >> Correct! I can\'t sing. Because you know I have a stuffy nose. >> I can\'t sing because I have stuffy nose.My voice is not clear. >> Correct!  And i am bad at singing high -pitched tones. >> And I am bad in singing high pitched tones.When you put your performance in YouTube , I will see it certainly. >> When you upload your performance at YouTube I will certainly watch it.Have a happy time to practice ^^ >> Have a happy time onyour practice. Below are my answers for my homework.1. walk through-> If we want to get there, we have to walk through many buildings. >> Correct!2. mess up-> To do overly something can mess up to achieve goal. >>To do overly on something can mess up achieving the goal.3. go up against-> In order to get success we go up against difficulty and fear about fail. >> In order to be successful, we need to go up against difficulty and fear of failing.4. enough said-> She nag him continuously , so he said \"Enough said\". >> Correct!5. loosen up-> The singer tried to loosen up before the performance. >> Correct!

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