Hi Nica.

2012-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Hi Nica . How was your weekend? I hope you had a great time.^^ Below paragraph is my answer for my homework. Thank you. " I remember the day when my family went to mud flat in incheon. At that time, There were my parents, my four sisters,my elder sister's husbands and my nephews. We dig out clams and got lunch together. To dig out clam was fresh and interesting things. We very enjoyed it. "

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Hi [이름]!!^^ My weekend was good. I enjoyed it with my family.^^ Thank you for your composition. You did great!^^ Keep it up!^^ I provided you some corrections on your sentences. I\'ll see you in class later.^^ __Teacher Nica__   Hi Nica . How was your weekend? >> Correct! I hope you had a great time.^^ >> Correct!Below paragraph is my answer for my homework. >> The paragraph below is my answer to my homework. Thank you.\" I remember the day when my family went to mud flat in incheon. >> Correct!At that time, There were my parents, my four sisters,my elder sister\'s husbands and my nephews. >> At that time, I was with my parents, four sisters, my elder sister\'s husbands and my nephews.We dig out clams and got lunch together. >> We dig out clams and had lunch together. To dig out clam was fresh and interesting things. >> Digging out clams was fresh and interesting.We very enjoyed it. \" >> We really enjoyed it.

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