Hi !! Nina(3.6)

2013-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi !! Nina(3.6) I read your letter. I look up in dictionary difficult sentences and words Thank you for your advice I encouraged to you I hope that I will talk free with you however, when you asked me, I did not answer. but I am keeping to learn english. It is 9:14 clock in the evening. It is time to watching TV for drama good night! Nina

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Hi MIss [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending me a message tonight.I am so happy to hear that you are doing your best in class. I can see your effort in studying English. Don\'t give up.Let\'s take it one step at a time.If you ahve any questions,don\'t hesistate to ask me during our class. You are doing good! Keep up the good work.You will be able to reach your goal in due time.Have a nice evening! See you tomorrow!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Hi !! Nina(3.6)I read your letter. >> Correct!I look up in dictionary difficult sentences and words >> I look up into the dictionary the difficult words that was used in the sentences. OR >> I checked the dictionary the difficult words from the sentences that was used.Thank you for your advice >> Correct!I encouraged to you >> I was encouraged. OR >> You encouraged me.I hope that I will talk free with you >> I hope that I will be able to talk freely with you. OR >> I hope to have a conversation with you freely.however, when you asked me, I did not answer. >> Correct!but I am keeping to learn english. >> But I am trying my best to learn English.It is 9:14 clock in the evening. >> It is nine fourteen in the evening.It is time to watching TV for drama >> It\'s time to watch the drama on television.good night! Nina >> Good night! Nina

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