Hi ! Nina

2014-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Good afternoon! It's thursday. I like Thursday. Specialy today i'm so happy because Queen Yun-A tops in short program event at Sochi olympic figure skating. Anyway. Yes. I think I'm an austere person. When somebody does mistake, i don't say anything. But If somebody does bad thing intentionally, I call a spade a spade who does it. And i don't trust person easily. but if i trust someone, i can give my everything to them.

강사 첨삭

Hello there and good afternoon!

I like Thursdays, too.^^

How are you doing today?

You sure are feeling happy because of what Yun-A has accomplished.^^

Face the day with a smile and everything will be great^^

See you later my dear student!^^ I can\'t wait to have a good discussion with you.

How about you? I\'ll just see you then!^^

Teacher Nina


Good afternoon!
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: A pleasant afternoon!
It\'s thursday. I like Thursday.

>> It is Thursday and I like it.

Specialy today i\'m so happy because Queen Yun-A tops in short program event at Sochi olympic figure skating.
>> Especially now, I am so happy because Queen Yun-A topped in figure skating at Sochi Olympic Games.
Anyway. Yes. I think I\'m an austere person.

>> Anyway, yes, I think I\'m an austere person.

When somebody does mistake, i don\'t say anything.

>> When somebody commits  a mistake, I don\'t say anything.

But If somebody does bad thing intentionally, I call a spade a spade who does it.
>> But if somebody does a bad thing intentionally, I call that spade a spade.

And i don\'t trust person easily.

>> Furthermore, I don\'t trust people easily.^^

but if i trust someone, i can give my everything to them.

>> However, if I trust someone, I can give him/her almost everything. 

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