Hi ! Nina.

2014-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy, Happy Friday ! It's really cold today even it's spring season. But I don't care about the weather because it's friday. And I got over my cold. Thank you, You always checking my condition in the class. I want to speak English fluently . At that time, I can express anything i want. Have nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! :p)

Happy, happy, happy Friday, too! \",

You really sound so excited and happy. Any plans?

Well, whatever it is, I hope that you will have fun.
Tell me more about it later.

And do not worry about your speaking ability.
I am very sure that you will be able to speak fluently in due time.

With your patience and determination, I am very sure that you will. Okay?
See you later!

T. Nina ^^


Happy, Happy Friday !
>> correct!
It\'s really cold today even it\'s spring season.

>> It\'s really cold today even if it\'s spring season.

But I don\'t care about the weather because it\'s friday.
>>
correct! [Friday]
And I got over my cold.
>> And I got over my colds.
Thank you, You always checking my condition in the class.
>> Thank you because you are always checking on my condition in the class. 
I want to speak English fluently .

>> I want to speak in English fluently.

At that time, I can express anything i want.
>> And at that time, I will be able to express anything that I want to say.
Have nice weekend!

>> Have a nice weekend!^^ 

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