Hi ! Nina,

2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi! Nina, How was your weekend? I visited my parenthouse in countryside. It was so good and i found a bat in the house. It was first time to see a bat where not in the joo. Anyway. I changed my lesson time and date. It will be start on next monday. I hope that i study with you continually

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!!

Good afternoon~~

Thank you very much for letting me know about the changes you\'ve made.

I really hope to go on studying with you too. :)

Anyway, kindly check the corrections I made here for you!

Have a nice day and see you~~

T.Nina-

Hi! Nina,
>> CORRECT!! (Hi, Nina!)
How was your weekend? I visited my parenthouse in countryside.

>> CORRECT!! I visited my parents in the countryside.

It was so good and i found a bat in the house.

>>It was good and I saw a bat at home.

It was first time to see a bat where not in the joo.

>> It was my first time to see a bat that\'s not in the zoo.

>> OR: It was my first time to see a bat out of the zoo.
Anyway. I changed my lesson time and date. It will be start on next monday.

>> Anyway, I changed my class time and schedule. It will take effect next Monday.

I hope that i study with you continually
>> I hope to study with you continuously.

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