Hi ! Nina,
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. ^^
Happy Tuesday! I hope that you are doing fine.
I hope I was able to explain it. Don\'t worry I tell you more about this in class.
Oh! I do understand your situation. ^^ No worries.
Please raise a lot of questions in class. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I\'m sorry.
>> Correct!
My cellphone was runed out yesterday.
>> My cellphone ran out of battery yesterday.
I need to change the new one.
>> I need to change my phone to a new one.
>> OR: I need to buy a new mobile phone.
well, Today, i want to know the difference of the meaning.
>> Well, I want to know the difference of these sentences.
Forexemple
>> For example. ( spelling check: example ^^ )
Operation performed
>> Correct!
>> It means that the procedure was done.
Perfoemd the critical operation
>> Correct! ( spelling check: performed ^^ )
>> It means that the important procedure was performed.
These sentences are both right?
>> Are these sentences right\'?
>> OR: Are both of these sentences right?
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