Hi ! Nina,

2014-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I'm sorry. My cellphone was runed out yesterday. I need to change the new one. well, Today, i want to know the difference of the meaning. Forexemple Operation performed Perfoemd the critical operation These sentences are both right?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. ^^

Happy Tuesday! I hope that you are doing fine.

I hope I was able to explain it. Don\'t worry I tell you more about this in class.

Oh! I do understand your situation. ^^ No worries.

Please raise a lot of questions in class. Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


I\'m sorry.

>> Correct!

My cellphone was runed out yesterday.

>> My cellphone ran out of battery yesterday.

I need to change the new one.

>> I need to change my phone to a new one. 

>> OR:  I need to buy a new mobile phone.
well, Today, i want to know the difference of the meaning.

>> Well, I want to know the difference of these sentences.

Forexemple 

>> For example. ( spelling check: example ^^ )
Operation performed

>> Correct! 

>> It means that the procedure was done.
Perfoemd the critical operation

>> Correct! ( spelling check: performed ^^ ) 

>> It means that the important procedure was performed.

These sentences are both right?

>> Are these sentences right\'?

>> OR: Are both of these sentences right?

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