Hi ! Nina. Please check my composition~

2014-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Sorry for always request a lot to you. As you know, we started to measure the C-bore hole size of the all susceptor. But we only have the spec of the 55KS and 55KSI susceptor. So we need the each spec or drawing for the measurement of the all C-bore hole. If the spec of the all susceptor is same with the 55ks and 55ksi , we will manage it as same condition. Could you please provide the specs or drawings as below? 2. Sorry for sending the packing process picture of the diffuser late. Please refer to attached file. If I missed anything, please let me know.

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Hello [이름]! Oh! I\'m sorry if I checked it a bit late. I hope I was able to give you options to choose from. I am glad to have you as my student. You are really happy to learn the language. Keep it up. ^^ Enjoy the rest of the day. ^^ Teacher Nina   1. Sorry for always request a lot to you. >> I\'m sorry for always asking a lot of requests from you. >> OR: I apologize that I always asking a request from you. As you know, we started to measure the C-bore hole size of the all susceptor. >> As you know, we started to measure the C-bore hole size of the susceptor. >> OR: As you know, we started to measure the C-bore hole size of the whole susceptor. >> OR: As you know, we started to measure the C-bore hole size of all of the susceptors. But we only have the spec of the 55KS and 55KSI susceptor. >> But we only have the specs of the 55KS and 55KSI susceptors. So we need the each spec or drawing for the measurement of the all C-bore hole. >> Did you mean: So, we need each of the spec or drawing for the measurement of all of the C-bore hole. >> OR: So, we need each spec or drawing for the measurement of all of the C-bore hole. If the spec of the all susceptor is same with the 55ks and 55ksi , we will manage it as same condition. >> If the spec of all of the susceptors are the same with the 55ks and 55ksi, we will manage it as the same condition. >> OR: If the spec of all of the susceptors are the same with the 55ks and 55ksi, we will manage it as it is. Could you please provide the specs or drawings as below? >> Could you please provde the specs or drawings as below. 2. Sorry for sending the packing process picture of the diffuser late. >> Correct >> OR: I apologize for sending the packing process picture of the diffuser late. Please refer to attached file. >> Please refer to the attached file. If I missed anything, please let me know. >> Correct

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