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The visual flaws were found on the surface of the FP006 55KX susceptor.

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>> Better: There were visual flaws found on the surface of the FP006 55KX susceptor.

First, A dent was found on the side area of the susceptor.

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We think it was occurred in process by accident.

>> We think it occurred during the process by accident.

The size of the dent is about 4mm (0.16”) and it’s not bare.

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Second, the chemical stains were found on the M20 Tap area of the back side.

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>> Better: Second, the chemical stains were found on M20 Tap area at the back side.

We think that the stain positions was minutely protruded than the other area so it became the stains after anodizing.

>> We think the the stain positions were miniscule protruded than the other area so it became a stain after the anodizing process. 

That kind of the surface flaws cannot be find before anodizing by visual inspection.

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It can be prevent by the surface polishing process but nomarly we do not conduct the process because it isn’t included in the drawing and Drossa process.

>> It can be prevented by the surface polishing process but normally, we don\'t conduct the process because it isn\'t included in the drawing and Drossa process.

The two issues can be remove by rework, but there has a risk that the G/T size will be bigger than the spec because of the additional chemical process.

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The FP006 is planned to ship within this week.

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So please give us the solutions of the above issues

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