hi pretty!

2011-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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good morning! these day, i really busy because of my report. thurseday, i have two presentation. one leaves ppt, so i have to make it. and the other presentation leaves lots of things... our time is composed by 4. anyone don't do that. i really angry yesterday, and i losed my temper. but they just laugted. today, i will finish all my homework. ..please make me happy :(

강사 첨삭

Oh, pretty busy [이름]. You can do it. Stay positive. Do a “reverse psychology”. Call your groupmates and study the dissertation in a fun atmosphere. You need to group your team and brainstorm tonight for the upcoming presentation. Take it easy. Good luck!^^ It’s me, T. Joanna   good morning! >>Good morning! these day, i really busy because of my report. >>I am really busy these days because of my report. thurseday, i have two presentation. >>I have two presentations to make this Thursday. one leaves ppt, so i have to make it. >>One is with a power point so I have to finalize it. and the other presentation leaves lots of things... >>And the other presentation needs more editing. our time is composed by 4. >>There are four members in my group. anyone don't do that. >>But not even one can do that. i really angry yesterday, >>I was really angry yesterday. and i losed my temper.but they just laugted. >> I lost my temper but they just laughed. today, i will finish all my homework. >>I will finish all the work today. ..please make me happy :( >>Please make me smile today! >>Please make me happy today!  

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