hi pretty!
학생이 쓴 원문
good morning!
these day, i really busy because of my report.
thurseday, i have two presentation.
one leaves ppt, so i have to make it.
and the other presentation leaves lots of things...
our time is composed by 4.
anyone don't do that.
i really angry yesterday, and i losed my temper.
but they just laugted.
today, i will finish all my homework.
..please make me happy :(
강사 첨삭
Oh, pretty busy [이름].
You can do it. Stay positive. Do a “reverse psychology”. Call your groupmates and study the dissertation in a fun atmosphere. You need to group your team and brainstorm tonight for the upcoming presentation. Take it easy.
Good luck!^^
It’s me,
T. Joanna
good morning!
>>Good morning!
these day, i really busy because of my report.
>>I am really busy these days because of my report.
thurseday, i have two presentation.
>>I have two presentations to make this Thursday.
one leaves ppt, so i have to make it.
>>One is with a power point so I have to finalize it.
and the other presentation leaves lots of things...
>>And the other presentation needs more editing.
our time is composed by 4.
>>There are four members in my group.
anyone don't do that.
>>But not even one can do that.
i really angry yesterday,
>>I was really angry yesterday.
and i losed my temper.but they just laugted.
>> I lost my temper but they just laughed.
today, i will finish all my homework.
>>I will finish all the work today.
..please make me happy :(
>>Please make me smile today!
>>Please make me happy today!
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