Hi, Rachel.

2012-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

I need to tell you something. when you'll read it, I'm going to work. So, I need to change the time for our class. If you don't mind, could you tell head officer my state or call me at 6:00.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday Suman! :) I hope that you enjoyed your long weekend. Anyway, regarding your concern, please try to contact our Korean manager and inform them that you are planning to change your class time, okay? However, I will try my best to talk to them about this matter.  I\'ll talk to you later! Have a nice day. :) I need to tell you something. >>CORRECT! when you\'ll read it, I\'m going to work. >>While reading this, I\'m on my way to work. So, I need to change the time for our class. >>CORRECT! If you don\'t mind, could you tell head officer my state or call me at 6:00. >>If you don\'t mind, could you tell the Korean manager regarding my concern or call me at 6:00.

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