Hi rain

2017-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I made instagram ID My ID is edward.choi.kr If you visit in it, you can see my picture ----------------------------- (My office workers are intented to play golf on sunday in Semtember) (I have a reservation to golf) We are 7 in all; me, a woman, and 5 men there are 2 teams 1 team is 4 persons the other team is 3 persons We will have a game that is skins and strokes.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name]!

Wow! That\'s a great idea. Please enjoy your time with them and play hard! ^^

Please see the corrections I made.^^ Have a great time and keep smiling! ^^

~Teacher Rain~

(My office workers are intented to play golf on sunday in Semtember)

>> My office workers will play golf on Sunday.
(I have a reservation to golf)

>> I already have a reservation.
We are 7 in all; me, a woman, and 5 men
>> CORRECT
there are 2 teams
>> CORRECT
1 team is 4 persons

>> There are 4 persons in the 1st team.
the other team is 3 persons
>> While there are only 3 persons in the 2nd team.
We will have a game that is skins and strokes.

>> DID YOU MEAN: We will have a game about different strokes.

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