Hi Reina

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Reina

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Hi~ Reina. Good afternoon. I am still so busy today like yesterday. Yesterday I was so disappointed at my English. I had many ideas willing to say, but I couldn't express them at all. Today I got a mail that my resume is passed. In early November, staffs in company that I willing to enter will come to Korea and I will be interviewd then. So I really worry about it. From today I want to explain about my career and knowledge to you as I say to interviewers. How do you think about it?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   First of all, I wanted to congratulate you for passing!^^ Like I said, I will help you with anything so don\'t hesitate to ask me anything specially regarding interviews. You can also write here about your career and knowledge so that I can check them before you tell it to me in our class. I\'m here to help you. ^,^ I\'ll talk to you soon!~   Teacher Reina *,*   Hi~ Reina. Good afternoon.>>> correct!^^I am still so busy today like yesterday.>>> correct!^^Yesterday I was so disappointed at my English. >>> Yesterday, I was so disappointed with my English.I had many ideas willing to say, but I couldn\'t express them at all.>>> I had a lot of ideas that I am willing to share/say but I couldn\'t express them at all.Today I got a mail that my resume is passed. >>> Today, I got an e-mail that my resume passed. In early November, staffs in company that I willing to enter will come to Korea and I will be interviewd then.>>> This November, staffs in the company that I will be entering will come to Korea and interview me. So I really worry about it. >>> correct!^^From today I want to explain about my career and knowledge to you as I say to interviewers. >>> From now on, I want to explain about my career and knowledge to you as I say it to the interviewers. How do you think about it? >>> What do you think about it?

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