Hi RJ!
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm very happy to study with you.
You're very kind teacher so I'm sure that I can improve my English ability in short time.
Because I work at a global company, I need English skill as soon as possible to communicate with sister company's colleagues.
I'll do my best!:)
See you at night, RJ~
강사 첨삭
Hello Irene,
Thank you for your letter.
It inspires me to try harder and do better in our class.
I hope this will help you very much with your career.
Thank you once again and talk to you later.
T.RJ
I'm very happy to study with you.
>>CORRECTYou're very kind teacher so I'm sure that I can improve my English ability in short time. >> You're a very kind teacher so I'm sure that I can improve my English ability in a short time.
Because I work at a global company, I need English skill as soon as possible to communicate with sister company's colleagues.
>> Because I work at a global company, I need to improve my English skills as soon as possible to communicate with our sister company's colleagues. I'll do my best!:)
>>CORRECTSee you at night, RJ~
>>See you tonight, RJ~
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