HI Rouis

2012-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning! Thank you for feedback. I read the corrected sentences you wrote and i knew my mistakes. I always make a mistake during our class. Even though you can catch on what i want to explain in english, I should reduce grammar errors and use variety english expression. I am convinced that you improve my level. See you tomorrow and have a nice day. -You wrote same homework which you give me last friday. check please ^^.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Happy Tuesday! I do understand that learning English frustrates you sometimes, but frustrations are really a part of learning. Also, mistakes are inevitable. Thank you very much for recognizing my efforts to help you improve but I believe you owe your improvement to yourself and not to anybody else. I always believe in you and in your abilities. Keep it up, [이름]! Anyway, I actually gave you 2 different homework. You must have overlooked it. Please check it again. Thank you. See you! -Louise- Here are my corrections for you: Good morning! >> CorrectThank you for feedback. >> Thank you for your feedback. I read the corrected sentences you wrote and i knew my mistakes. >> Correct (Just capitalize I) >> OR: I have read the corrected sentences you wrote and I was able to check my mistakes. I always make a mistake during our class. >> Correct >>  OR: I always make mistakes during class. Even though you can catch on what i want to explain in english, I should reduce grammar errors and use variety english expression. >> Even though you can catch what I want to say in English, I should still reduce (or lessen)  my errors in grammar and try to use a variety of English expressions. I am convinced that you improve my level. >> I am convinced that you help me improve my level. See you tomorrow and have a nice day. >> Correct You wrote same homework which you give me last friday. >> You gave me the same homework which I had last friday. check please ^^. >> Please check. ^^ >> Please do check about it. ^^  

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·